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Monday, 26 November 2018

How to improve your essays

Compare these two texts:


TEXT 1: TOBY

Toby got up at 6 o’clock.
Toby had a bone for breakfast.
Toby was happy.
Toby jumped and ran.
Toby played with Ron and Pastor.
Toby went to the river.
Toby swam.
Toby liked the river.
Toby went back home.
Toby had dog food for dinner.
Toby barked at a cat.
Toby went into his shed.
Toby slept at 11 o’clock.